Drowning – May 2, 2012
Staring, churning
Watching, whirling
Falling, moving
Sinking, knocking
Rushing, roaring
Pulling, crashing
Gasping, swallowing
Choking, panicking
Freezing, slowing
Relaxing, darkening
Stopping, sinking
Peaceful
Black.
Nice post but what do you exactly want to say or express? I think its your random thinking that you are sharing with us. However, it could have been moulded into a poetic piece.
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